Shayari...  

Posted by Jainuine

Recently, I have been doing some arbit shayari. Thought it would be good to share with everyone, afterall why to bear the pain alone...
:)
Arz kiya hai -

Baat us baat mein kya, jo ek baar mein bata na paye
na chhu sake dil ko, rooh ki khidkiyaan khol na paye
haal-e-dil bayaan na ho, ashaas samjha na paye
bewkoof hai woh banda-e-khaki, jiski baat ek baar mein bata na paye

Baat to us baat mein hai
jo mann mein kasak jagaye, adhron pe muskaan le aaye
zaar kar de sansarik dimaag ko, dil ko sochwa jaye
aapke dil mein dabi chah(at) ko, naw-ba-naw roop de jaye

Let your critical words flow...
:D

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12:01 PM

"ashaas"

plural of ashaa? badi modern shayari hai bhai

5:14 PM
Anonymous  

ankit bhai....fundooo from wht i understood :)

6:30 PM

come on Don, i expected critical comments..
:)

9:01 PM

good one :)... but aisa koi hoga kya jo har samay aisi baatein kare?

12:52 PM

I hope we find one...
:)
mystique - nice to have you here. sorry, just checked your comment. I am coming here after a long time myself...

9:32 PM

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